Hey Sophia, great pitch! good job controlling the speed, and not talking fast. I also really liked your explanations of how your masks differentiate with existing ones. One thing I would suggest is coming off as more energetic and passionate about the product, and having a call to action at the end. Overall, the pitch was very informative.
Sophia, I thought you spoke really well and covered a lot of good points about you ideas. You kept my attention the whole time and I was really interested in what you had to say. I think the one thing you could improve about this elevator pitch was getting a bit more of a better attention grabber in the beginning. Other than that, I thought you did a great job and showed a lot of confidence about your service. Thanks for sharing, Morgan Mowery
Sophia, That was a really good elevator pitch! You spoke clearly and it was easy to keep my attention. You seemed confident in your service and I think that is essential to a good elevator pitch. You described the difference between your masks and the ones already on the market and I think that was a smart idea. One important thing about an elevator pitch is being memorable, and I think overall you did a great job!
Hey Sophia,
ReplyDeletegreat pitch! good job controlling the speed, and not talking fast. I also really liked your explanations of how your masks differentiate with existing ones. One thing I would suggest is coming off as more energetic and passionate about the product, and having a call to action at the end. Overall, the pitch was very informative.
Sophia,
ReplyDeleteI thought you spoke really well and covered a lot of good points about you ideas. You kept my attention the whole time and I was really interested in what you had to say. I think the one thing you could improve about this elevator pitch was getting a bit more of a better attention grabber in the beginning. Other than that, I thought you did a great job and showed a lot of confidence about your service.
Thanks for sharing,
Morgan Mowery
Sophia,
ReplyDeleteThat was a really good elevator pitch! You spoke clearly and it was easy to keep my attention. You seemed confident in your service and I think that is essential to a good elevator pitch. You described the difference between your masks and the ones already on the market and I think that was a smart idea. One important thing about an elevator pitch is being memorable, and I think overall you did a great job!