I received positive feedback about the information that I gave in my pitch. The only things that were pointed out about my delivery were my enthusiasm in the beginning as well as not having the best closing strategy that would connect to the customers. I changed these aspects and tried to focus more on the outcome on the feelings of people who are watching this pitch. I thought all the constructive criticism was valid and therefore included it into my new pitch.
Hi Sophia,
ReplyDeleteGreat job starting with the issue and ending with an ask. The cutting of the video was a bit distracting when ‘piecing’ together your pitch, but I was able to understand what you were saying, what your product was and who it was for. Overall, it was a good pitch and I think you can build more off of this last one for the next one!
Hope this helps!
Respectfully,
Edwin
hi Sophia,
ReplyDeletegreat pitch, you spoke in a nice pace which made it easy as a listener to understand the points you made. You were enthusiastic about your product which in turn makes me enthusiastic as well. One thing that can be worked on is the cutting between clips which was a bit distracting. Overall, great job.
Hi Sophia! I like how you took the feedback and used it for this assignment. Your ideas came across clearly, they were detailed and easy to understand. I like how you connected with us from the beginning. You were very confident which helped sell your idea. For the next time I would maybe work on the transitions between clips because they were a little choppy. Overall, you did a really good job for this assignment. Thank you for sharing.
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